My Mother

My mother has a beautiful soul! Despite her natural beauty having receded, she now being a little old and obese and having difficulty walking, this is my mother's saving grace!  (is a widow, who is a fat and old lady. She has a short white hair, small eyes and a big nose. Her legs are curved because of suffering from leg sicknesses. Although her apperance is not pretty, her soul is beautiful.) 

My mother is talkative. Every day (Everyday) I return (come back) home, she talks at length (tells me lots of things) about the price of vegetables, meat and rice. She also tells me of (the) gossip and cracks jokes, which makes me laugh again and again / over and over. She is sensitive, (senstive), pays attention to detail (detailed-orientated) and is caring. My mother (She) remembers exactly where things are (all things) placed at home and the times I come and go. (, the time I am back and leave home.) She knows what I like and hate and what to buy me. (my favourites and hates, so she bought what I like mot.) Every day,she will show how she cares by (She takes care of me such as) preparing a big lunch box for me and making my bed. She urges me be careful when crossing (of crosing) the road (roads, or) and to wear more clothes when (since) the weather is getting cold. I love her more and more even though I sometimes (I) think she is becoming a fussy (becomes a long-winded) old lady. 

Moreover, my mother is strong in heart and mind, which I (am) really appreciate. (appreciated.) My father (was) passed away so she became a widow when I was 10 years old, after which the whole family fell into despair (a dark scene) because of being left in proverty. Sadly, at that time, (moment) my mother also suffered (was suffering) from back pain and depression. However, she never gave up, giving of (she adopted my sister and me, tried) her best as she took (to take over the) sole responsibility for looking after my sister and me. (from my father.) Since (Until) I studied at (the) university, I've understood how my mother worked from hand (handed) to mouth, the situation was never (not that) easy! 

Now, she suffers (is suffering) from high blood pressure, leg ailments (sicknesses), back pain and headaches. As a result, (the illness,) she becomes impatient (impatience) and emotional. She talks of age catching up with her (has said she is getting older and older now, she) and wants to travel before it is too late. (going to the heaven.) I have promised her if I have enough money, I will plan an Asian trip for her. So, to show my love for mother, I have been saving ever since graduating from university. (after I graduated from the university, I have saved money for plaining an Asia trip to show my love to mother.) This coming September, my mother and I are going to travel to Singapore and Kuala Lumpur. My mother is feeling excited, she is looking forward to traveling/travelling around (the) Asia.

Mum, I love you!

Vivid and honest account of life's hardships, well documented and nicely written with a positive ending. I have suggested rearranging your first paragraph so it starts on a positive note!

My Mother

My mother is a widow, who is a fat and old lady. She has short white hair, small eyes and a big nose. Her legs are curved because she suffers from a leg illness. Although her appearance is not pretty, her soul is beautiful.

My mother is talkative. Everyday when I come back home, she tells me lots of things about the price of vegetables, meat and rice. She also tells me the gossip and jokes, which makes me laugh again and again. She is senstive, detail-orientated and caring. She remembers all things placed at home, the time I leave home and the time that I come back. She knows my favorite things and the things that I hate, so she buys what I like most. She takes care of me such as preparing a big lunch box and making my bed. She urges me to be careful when crossing the roads, or to wear more clothes when the weather is cold. I love her more and more even when sometimes I think she becomes a long-winded old lady.

Moreover, my mother is strong in heart and mind, which I really appreciate. My father passed away when I was 10 years old, the whole family fell into a dark period because we were poor. Sadly, at that moment my mother suffered from back pain and depression. However, she never gave up, she adopted me and my sister, tried her best to take over the responsibilities from my father. Until I studied at the university, I never understood how my mother had worked from hand to mouth, the situation was not that easy.

Now she suffers from high blood pressure, leg illness, back pains and headaches. Because of the illness, she becomes impatienct and emotional. She says that she is getting older and older now, she wants to travel before going to heaven. I promised her that if I have enough money, I will plan an Asian trip for her. So after I graduate from the university, I saved enough money to plan an Asian trip to show my love to my mother. This coming September, my mother and I are going to travel to

Singapore and Kuala Lumpur. My mother feels excited, she is looking forward to traveling around Asia.

Mum, I love you!