juan castro
I don´t feel ok. Today has been a hard day because I have headache, all my body hurts and really I don´t want to do anything. My old brother told me I have to rest and take medications suggest to improve my health, so I´m trying to rest to be better as soon as possible. I think if I take into account the suggestion of my family, I´ll get well, that´s what I want.
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I don´t feel ok/good/well

Today has been a hard day because I have a headache, all my body hurts and I really I don't want to do anything. My older brother told me that I have to rest and take medications suggest medicine that is supposed to improve my health, so I'm trying to rest to be get better as soon as possible. I think if I take my family's suggestions into account the suggestion of my family, I'll get well, that's what I want.

 

Just needes a little editing to sound more natural. 

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Thank you Tavia, so, my entrance is well written?
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Yes, take your medicine and try to get some rest. Hope you feel better soon!
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