Felipe
trying to write in english Hi I'm Felipe Segura and try to learn english because i wish someday go to usa, probably to keep studying or find a job or whatever, my english is too poor, so maybe it's not this well expressed in the best way. Any corrections will be well received.
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Trying to write in English

Hi! I'm Felipe Segura, and I am trying to learn English because I want to go to USA someday, probably to keep studying or to find a job or whatever. My english is very poor, so maybe I've not expressed myself in the best way. Any corrections will be well received.

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trying to write in english

Hi I'm Felipe Segura and I'm trying to learn English because i wish someday go to the USA, probably to keep studying or find a job or whatever. My  English is too poor, so maybe it's not this well expressed in the best way. Any corrections will be well received.

 

I think you write pretty well, but just remember to use Capital letters for the word English.

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Hello Felipe and welcome to italki!
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