Aïcha
I'm gonna be an Aunt :) My sister is pregnant, she's going to give birth to two beautiful girls. finally she's gonna be a mother and I'm gonna be an aunt :D. My sister's daughters are the 1st babies we had in my family, my parents are glad because they are going to be gran-parents. we can't wait for that.
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I'm going to be an Aunt :)

My sister is pregnant, and she's going to give birth to two beautiful girls.
Finally she's going to be a mother and I'm going be an aunt :D.

My sister's daughters will be the 1st grandchildren for  my parents. They are glad because they are going to be grandarents.


We can't wait!

 

 

Well done, I made some changes though. Gonna is not a real word :) Also, I restructured the sentence about the first babies in your family. 

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I'm gonna be an Aunt :)

My sister is pregnant, she's going to give birth to two beautiful girls.
finally she's gonna be a mother and I'm gonna be an aunt :D.

My sister's daughters are the 1st babies we have had in my family, my parents are glad because they are going to be gran-parents.
we can't wait for that.

 

well writen, and congraduations 

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@Saqib don't be, error is Human
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@Su.Ki Thank's for your help
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Thanks Su.Ki - actually I thought I did correct the word Grandparents In my haste, I seem to have carelessly omitted the P - oh the shame of it :/
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