José
my first attempt hello, this is my first attempt of speaking in english, it is very difficult because i don't know much of grammar
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Hello, this is my first attempt at speaking English, and it is very difficult because I don't know much about grammar.

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My first attempt

Hello, this is my first attempt of at  speaking in English. It is very difficult because I don't know much of about grammar.

 

Good job, keep it up. Because you are a beginner, it's better and easier to keep your sentences short.

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