Anna
After work ... Today, after work I went to the beach. There I saw a beautiful sunset, and people bathing in the sea waves and sunlight)
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After work ...

Today, after work I went to the beach. There I saw a beautiful sunset, and people bathing in the sea waves and sunlight)

 

Not really a correction, but this is my version:

After work today, I went to the beach. In the evening sunshine I saw people enjoying the sea before a beautiful sunset.

This is because the photo was some time before sunset.

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Well, maybe the sunshine and people bathing in the foto hard to see, but I ask believe eyewitness - they are there)))
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Great photo but no sunlight or sunbathing :)
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it)))
٢٢ يوليو ٢٠١٥
Hi..nice pic!! .greetings
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