你說的也沒什麼問題啦其實，不過換做是我

我會說：聽了五月天的歌讓我很想念台灣

Is this sentence correct?  Another more "native" version.  

Is this sentence correct?

It‘s correct if you wanted to say you miss Taiwan. But if you want to express：Listening to the song of MAYDAY makes you think of Taiwan, you'd better write it like this：

聽五月天的歌，讓我想起了台灣。

想念=miss

想起=think of/remember