please Correct my notebook. I am writing a very interesting and short story.
I am writing 1 cookup story. In this story are four characters, there name are Rinki, Mrs Bhalla, Mihir and Raman. Mrs. Bhalla is the Mother of Rinki and Raman. So that's mean Rinki and Raman are siblings. and Mihir is Rinki's husband.
Rinki talks to Mrs. Bhalla about Mihir going to US, and there is no one to help them, theyhave to make everything on their own. Mrs. Bhalla says "yes, your dad has nothing now, why can't we take Raman’s help?" Maybe Mihir has savings so he is doing this. Rinki says "Raman think he is in controls of our lives, so he is sending Mihir to US, I told Mihir to let me shift to the new flat". Mrs. Bhalla understands Rinki has ignited fire in her home, and asked Mihir for the flat, poor Mihir.
(maaf kijiye, i corrected the ones i understood. but you are really wonderful, aur aapka story bahut acchi hain)