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My day My day seem short. During my day I do various things, but the morning goes so fast. Later, then of the lunch the time seem goes a little more slowly but the night runs with no mercy.
١ أغسطس ٢٠١٥ ٠٤:٥١
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My day

 

My day seems so short. During my the day I do various things, but the morning goes so fast.
Later, then of the After lunch the time seems to goes a little more slowly but the night runs flies by (or "passes by" or "zooms by") with no mercy.

 

Also, saying "I do various things during the day" sounds more natural, although there's nothing wrong with how you wrote it too.

١ أغسطس ٢٠١٥
Ja, ja, ja, no. In the afternoon I'm sleepy, maybe that is why I feel slow afternoon.
١ أغسطس ٢٠١٥
Time seems to pass the quickest when we're having the most fun, so maybe your mornings and nights are very exciting, whereas your afternoons are boring. Maybe you have to work in the afternoon, haha.
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