Linda
Learn Swimming I went to learn swimming last night, this is my first me to swimming, I can't swim at all. When I first put in the water, I'm very afraid. My friend taught me, first to learn exhale, then dived down into the water. I repetition learn. After two hours, I learned to know some skill.
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Hey Linda! Very nice story! Here are some corrections

 

Learn Swimming

I went swimming last night. This was my first time swimming. Before this, I couldn't swim at all. When I first went into the water, I was very afraid. My friend taught me how to exhale then how to dive down into the water. I learned by repepition. After two hours, I can swim a little.

 

I hope that helps! 我希望这个会帮助你。如果你有问题,可以问问我!

 

 

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