Hello Svitlana. Very well done for such an excellent piece of writing. Your summer really does sound fantastic!!!

I wanted to add a comment on "funny mood", as it is a confusing word in English. "Funny" can mean "comical" or "strange/odd". When put next to mood, it means "odd", so be careful. That is why I have put "amusing mood" instead.

I hope that helps, Tom 

My ideal summer holiday

Summer time is the best time of my life. I prefer activity holidays, because you can do something useful for your life. This summer I learned more and more new things. For example I drew beautiful pictures, went to horse riding, danced did dancing and listened to different kinds of music. I also did lots of cookery. It was practical, because I improved my culinary skills. My mother was very glad to help me. In July I did went canoeing. It was so fun and I enjoyed being taught by experts. My summer was amazing and unforgettable.
I think activity holidays provides us with funny amusing moods and interesting adventures. It's They are a great opportunity to make new friends. We are young people and we have a number of possibilities. So, we must use them it!