Fathers day

My daughter had a surprise visit to see her dad for this year's fathers day.. he didn't expect her to visit and i saw him crying for the first time when he saw her. my daughter has moved to another state for work reasons and i think he misses her very dearly.

Fathers day

My daughter had a surprise visit to see her dad for this year fathers day.. he didn't expect her visit and i saw him first time crying when he saw her. my daughter has moved to another state for work reason and i think he miss her very dearly.

could someone correct this one for me.