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There is the golden autumn is in my town! Hi,dear! There is the golden autumn is in my town! The trees like from a fairy tale! The sun plays with leafs. But me sad despite of this magnificence. I would like some heat. A little of heat of human communication, understanding, care and, of course. a little love. Today I would like to write you. Do you like the autumn? I want bring you a cup of tea and wrap yourself in a warm blanket and watch a good old film. Together. You and me. With best regards
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There is the golden autumn is (you don't need is twice) in my town!

Hi, dear! There is the golden autumn is in my town! The trees like from a fairy tale! The sun plays with leafs leaves. But me I am sad despite of use despite by itself, not "despite of" this magnificence. I would like some heat. A little of heat of human communication, understanding, care and, of course, a little love. Today I would like to write to you. Do you like the autumn? I want to bring you a cup of tea and wrap yourself in a warm blanket and watch a good old film. Together. You and me. With best regards

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There is the golden autumn is in my town!

Hi,dear! There is the golden autumn is in my town! The trees are like they are from a fairy tale! The sun plays with leafs leaves. But me I am sad despite of this magnificence. I would like some heat. A little of heat of human communication, understanding, care and, of course.a little love. Today I would like to write to you. Do you like the autumn? I want to bring you a cup of tea, and wrap yourself in a warm blanket, and watch a good old film (movie could be used here instead of film). Together. You and me I. With best regards.

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There is the golden autumn in my town!

Hi,dear! There is the golden autumnin my town! The trees like from a fairy tale! The sun plays with leaves But I am sad despite this magnificence. I would like some heat. A little of heat of human communication, understanding, care and, of course. a little love. Today I would like to write to you. Do you like the autumn? I want to bring you a cup of tea and wrap you in a warm blanket and watch a good old film. Together. You and me. With best regards

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Really nice, I liked reading this!
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