I went to a cat cafe (=^･ｪ･^=)

Do you know <em>cat cafès</em>?
<em>They have begun</em> to grow in Japan <em>since</em> a few years ago.
We can have a tea, and <em>[I'd use a comma instead of "and" here] </em>use Wi-Fi and sit on a sofa like <em>in </em>a familiar cafe;
In addition, there were many cute cats there and most of <em>the</em> guests were couples or girls.
We can stroke them and <em>[same thing] </em>feed <em>them</em> and play with them freely.
<em>The cat in this</em> photo is my favorite.
It was tame and very beautiful.

The cafe had a relaxed atmosphere though there were many <em>cats</em>.
It made me want to keep a cat!

<em>I've never heard of cat cafès before, funny idea :)</em>

I went to a cat cafe (=^･ｪ･^=)

Do you know a cat cafe?
They are beginning to grow in Japan starting from a few years ago.
We can have tea, use Wi-Fi and sit on a sofa like a normal cafe;
in addition, there were many cute cats there and most of the guests were couples or girls.
We can pet them, feed and play with them freely.
This photo's cat is my favorite.
It was tame and very beautiful.

The cafe had a relaxed atmosphere even though there were many cats.
It made me want a cat!


Overall great job! There were a couple of word choice problems, like stroke vs pet, I think most english speakers would use pet.