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Michael
A letter to my old Chinese Teacher 你好李老师, 我只要说谢谢你。你是一个太亲切的老师和女孩。谢谢你的帮助。我想你的课们。 再见 Michael I have just recently completed my Chinese classes. This is a letter to my Chinese teacher, telling her that she's kind and thanking her for her help/lessons. I welcome any corrections and advice with this letter. 谢谢你们
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A letter to my old Chinese Teacher

你好李老师,

我只要说谢谢你。你是一个太亲切的老师和女孩。谢谢你的帮助。我想你的课们。

再见

 

Hey, here are a few things that might be useful:

When you say hello to a teacher, you say "老师好"

只要 is not how you say "only want", which is what I think you want to say. 只要 is used to mean "only whenever" or "only by" when used in grammar patterns with 才. 例句:只要努力学习才会成功 - only by studying hard can you succeed. Sometimes this 只要 is ommited. You want to say 只想. Generally, 想 is a better translation for "I want to". They way you say "what I want to say is___" is “我想说的就是___". 

Teachers are usually referred to with the measure word 位 or 名, both of which are more polite

You say that she's "too amiable", whicih is a bit off. 和气 is a better translation for "friendly", and usally you say 很 before an adjevtive. 

A 女孩儿 is a small female child... I doubt your teacher is a kid! 

喜欢 is "to like". Your last sentence reads "I want to you classes”.

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A letter to my old Chinese Teacher

你好李老师:

只要说谢谢你。你是一个亲切的老师和女孩。谢谢你的帮助。我想你的课们

我只想说声谢谢,你是一个很亲切的老师,,也是个很可爱的女孩(应该是个年轻的来老师吧?)。非常感谢你对我的帮助,我很想念和你一起上课的时光。

再见

Michael

I have just recently completed my Chinese classes. This is a letter to my Chinese teacher, telling her that she's kind and thanking her for her help/lessons. I welcome any corrections and advice with this letter.
谢谢你们

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好!李老师: 


只要说谢谢您。你是一个亲切的老师,也是一个(很+Adj+的)女孩。谢谢的帮助。我怀念您的课堂。

再见!

 

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