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I translate Japanese song to English please correct(´・ω・) Traveler in the dark What is normal, what is not? I’d got lost my way, but I still alive Standing on the dark floor alone, waiting for the music someone get start “I am the one this city doesn’t need” Evaded the depressed fully days What is painful? What is not? I’d been distinguishing it, but had just walked I compensated myself with saturating others one by one with wrong words “ I‘m the one nobody loves forever” Separated that depressing myself Dance! Dance! Forget everything Dance in the music! Laugh!Laugh! Shaking off everything, Laugh! stimulating the present! Sing! Sing! Until light comes again Sing! Sing! Traveler in the dark by BaseBallBear

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Thank you for your correction.I corrected my translation and please recorrrect this.

 

I translated a Japanese song to English. Please correct it.(´・ω・)

Traveler in the dark

What is normal, what is not? I’d lost my way, but I'm still alive
Standing on the dark floor alone, waiting for someone get start music
“I am the one this city doesn’t need”
I escape from the depressing days

What is painful? What is not? I'd been distingished it.But I’d just walked the path
I compensated myself by depping others one by one with wrong words
“ I‘m the one nobody will ever love”
I separate that depressing myself

Dance! Dance! Forget everything
Dance in the music!
Laugh! Laugh to shake off everything! Laugh and stimulate the present!

Sing! Sing! Until light comes again
Sing! Sing! Traveler in the dark

by BaseBallBear

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I translate Japanese song to English please correct(´・ω・)

I translated a Japanese song to English. Please correct it.

 

Traveler in the dark

What is normal, what is not? I’d got lost my way, but I still alive

What is normal, what is not? I’d lost my way, but I'm still alive.


Standing on the dark floor alone, waiting for the music someone get start

Standing on the dark floor alone, waiting for the music to begin.


“I am the one this city doesn’t need”
Evaded the depressed fully days (<= わかりません。)

What is painful? What is not? I’d been distinguishing it, but had just walked

What is painful? What is not? I used to know the difference, but walked away from it (<= 私は推測しています。)


I compensated myself with saturating others one by one with wrong words

I compensated myself by saturating others one by one with wrong words (<= 私は推測を持っていません。)


“ I‘m the one nobody loves forever”

"I'm the one nobody will ever love."


Separated that depressing myself

Dance! Dance! Forget everything
Dance in the music!
Laugh!Laugh! Shaking off everything, Laugh! stimulating the present!

Laugh! Laugh! Shake off everything, and laugh! Live for the moment!

Sing! Sing! Until light comes again
Sing! Sing! Traveler in the dark

by BaseBallBear

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