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I will have a blind date later~~ My mom set me a blind date today, apparently the fact that I am still not married really worried her, and one of her friend's friends's sister's son is bachelor and available recently , so bingo, she arrange a date to me~~~ what a lovely mom~~ (▔▽▔) I don't know you guys, but for me I am a little bit shame that being a single when I have to face my family, I mean I'm OK with that, but my mom talk about how cute her friend's grandchildren all the time, and to be honest she is already the coolest mom I ever know who has a unmarried daughter in my age, my aunts started to worried me like 4 years ago. I get myself too far, anyway, I decide OK, why not~~I Never be in a blind day before, my be I will meet my Mr right and live happily together forever like the fairy tale(☆_☆) or...just wake up from a day dream. The only thing that unfair is that my lovely mom just remember to give her friends my picture and never get that boy's picture for me~~and I quote her"think about birthday surprise party, it will be fun. "╬▔皿▔ Jesus, I never get a appropriate birthday surprise from her, ever~~~ Wish me good luck today~~

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I will have a blind date later~~

My mom set me up for a blind date today; apparently the fact that I am still not married really worries her, and one of her friend's' friend's's sister's son is a bachelor and available (recently) , so bingo, she has arranged a date to for me~~~ what a lovely mom~~ (▔▽▔)
I don't know you guys, but for me, I am a little bit ashamed that about being a single when I have to face my family, I mean I'm OK with that, but my mom talks  all the time about how cute her friend's grandchildren are [all the time], and to be honest, she is already the coolest mom I ever know, who has an unmarried daughter in (of) my age. My aunts started to worryied about me like 4 years ago. [I get myself too far, anyway,] I decide OK, why not~~I have never been in on a blind date day before, maybe I will meet my Mr right, and live happily together forever, like the fairy tale(☆_☆) or...just wake up from a day dream.
The only thing that is unfair is that my lovely mom just remembered to give her friends my picture, and never did not get that boy's picture for me~~and I quote her"think about birthday surprise party, it will be fun. "╬▔皿▔ Jesus, I never get an appropriate birthday surprise from her, ever~~~
Wish me good luck today~~

Good luck !

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I will have a blind date later~~

My mom set me up on a blind date today. Apparently the fact that I am still not married really worried her, and one of her friend's friends's sister's son is a bachelor and available recently, so bingo, she arranged a date for me~~~ what a lovely mom~~ (▔▽▔)
I don't know about you guys, but for me I am a little bit ashamed of being single when I have to face my family. I mean, I'm OK with that, but my mom talks about how cute her friend's grandchildren are all the time, and to be honest she is already the coolest mom ever who has an unmarried daughter my age. My aunts started to worry about me like 4 years ago. I got myself too far, anyway, I decided OK, why not~~I have never been on a blind date before, but maybe I will meet my Mr. Right and live happily together forever like in fairy tales.(☆_☆) Or...just wake up from a day dream.
The only thing that is unfair is that my lovely mom only remembered(Make sure to put words in the past tense) to give her friends my picture and never got the boy's picture for me~~and I quote her "think about it as a birthday surprise party, it will be fun. "╬▔皿▔ Jesus, I never get an appropriate birthday surprise from her, ever~~~
Wish me good luck today~~



I highlighted major changes, other minor ones were simply spelling or subject/verb agreement that I just corrected within the text. Good luck on your blind date! Have fun!
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谢谢~
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Great story, hope it goes well and have fun. You used words such as "so bingo", "coolest mom", "Jesus" very well. 表达的很好。

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