Hi Michelle, your text has a perfect structure, but you have had few of mistakes that you could change to improve the text. 1- The first thing is that you don´t present yourself, an example: “hola, soy Michelle de los Estados Unidos, vivo en las llanuras de Colorado (“del Colorado” if you talk about the river, de + el). 2- The second mistake is that you write like a poet, because you have used a polysyndeton, that is when you write “y”, “y” and other “y” instead of “,”. In your text you want to put “,” and finally “y” and close the sentence with “.”. For example: -Tengo gallinas, un conejo y un jardín muy bueno con plantas de tomate (tomatera/s), pimientos y judías verdes.- -Tengo gallinas, un conejo y un huerto.- I think that you write about an orchard, but both are correct. 3-The third mistake is “un jardín muy excelente”: bueno/muy bueno but never “muy excelente”, because it is a superlative. The correct way: “un jardín muy bueno”, “un buen jardín/ un jardín bueno” or “ Michelle ha escrito un texto excelente”. 4-...judías verdes. O al menos tenía un buen jardín/huerto, ya que... … judías verdes, o al menos tenía un buen jardín/huerto, pues hubo... 5-When you use “feroz”? When you talk or write “feroz” normally is for a some kind of animal, “una tormenta feroz” is correct if you want a poetical way to express yourself. It is correct, but it is more suitable adjetives like “fuerte” in that case. 6-The rest are mistakes with the gender and number of the substantives/nouns. I hope I´ve helped. Un fuerte abrazo y perdona por mi inglés. ;) Sigue así.