Diary Entry for December 13rd
Today I had lunch with my best friend. However，considering the scarcity of money we decided to have lunch in school dining room.
She is a charming and considerate girl. I have known her for five years. Recently she is busy because she has been practicing in a Cultural Media Co.Ltd. So I haven't seen her for a long time.
She told me how boring to do a lot of trifles day and day. How dreadful the morning rush is. She felt tired and couldn't show her value in this job. I just had rare social experiences. So I didn't know how to suggest her. But I thought to be an adult，she could be responsible for her choice. As a friend，what I should do is give her support！
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Diary Entry for December 13th
Today I had lunch with my best friend. However，considering the scarcity of money we decided to have lunch in the school dining room.She is a charming and considerate girl. I have known her for five years. Lately, she is busy(she's been busy sounds more natural here) because she has been practicing in a Cultural Media Co.Ltd.(I don't understand this sentence well so I'm not sure) So I haven't seen her for a long time.
She told me how boring to do a lot of trifles day and day. =
She told me how boring it is to deal with a lot of trifles day by day. (this sentence is kind of awkward but the grammar is now correct I think)
How dreadful the morning rush is. She felt tired and couldn't show her value(prove her value/worth) in this job. I only had rare social experiences(?). So I didn't know what to tell her. But I thought to be an adult，she could be responsible for her choice.
maybe: But I feel that as an adult, she should be responsible for her own choices.
As a friend，what I should do is give her support！
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And here are the numbers:)
1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th, 6th, 7th, 8th, 9th, 10th, 11th, 12th, 13th, 14th, 15th, 16th, 17th, 18th, 19th, 20th, 21st, 22nd, 23rd, 24th, 25th... (etc)
It is th for 10-20 but then any number ending in 3 after that is rd (23rd, 33rd, 43rd, 53rd, 63rd, 73rd)
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Okay！Thank you ！I am confused about this all the time！
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Diary Entry for December 13rd
Today I had lunch with my best friend. However, considering the scarcity of money we decided to have lunch in the school dining room.She is a charming and considerate girl. I have known her for five years. Recently Lately she has been busy because she has been practicing in a Cultural Media Co.Ltd. So I haven't seen her for a long time.
She told me how boring to do a lot of trifles day and day. How dreadful the morning rush is. She felt tired and couldn't show her value in this job. I just had rare social experiences. So I didn't know how to suggest her. But I thought to be an adult，she could be responsible for her choice. As a friend，what I should do is give her support！
Dahlia, great job! In the 5th sentence I suggested changing "recently she is busy because she has been..." to "...she has been busy because she has been..." to keep the tenses consistent. I'm curious as to what you mean by you having "rare social experiences." Elaborating on that could help readers understand the context a little better, but I think all the points you are trying to make can be understood. Congratulations!
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I think here is a problem with number. In English they usually say - 1st, 2nd,3rd but after that everything will have a suffix of "th". Like - 5th,6th,12th,13th
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