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Seven days So, it's the second day of my "one-week writing" challenge and the subject for the 7t March is "Seven Days". If I woke up tomorrow morning to find all my plans have been cancelled for the seven days and $10.000 on my dresser, I would be luckiest man on the planet. My next seven days would look like a dream! I would be finally able to do things which I have wanted to do for a long time. Firstly, I would buy a travel tour for my mom, maybe to France or Bali. She has been working for a long time without a rest, so she really needs this vacation! Then I would travel to Milan to go to shops which are known as the best shops in the world! Prada, Valentino.... ohhh... And after all I would go to Sicily, because I have been dreaming about a sea since autumn! I would be there for 3 or 4 days! Finally, I would come back to Moscow and meet with my best friend! I really haven't free time because of the university, so a week without it will be my best week!

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Seven days

So, it's the second day of my "one-week writing" challenge and the subject for the 7th March is "Seven days". If I woke up tomorrow morning to find all my plans have been cancelled for the next seven days and $10,000 on my dresser, I would be luckiest man on the planet. My next seven days would look like a dream! I would finally be able to do things that I have wanted to do for a long time.
First, I would buy a travel tour for my mom, maybe to France or Bali. She has been working for a long time without rest, so she really needs this vacation!
Then I would travel to Milan to go shopping, as the shops are reputed to be the best in the world! Prada, Valentino.... ohhh...
And after all that, I would go to Sicily, because I have been dreaming about this since last autumn! I would be there for 3 or 4 days!
Finally, I would come back to Moscow and meet up with my best friend!
I really haven't any free time because of my university studies, so a week without it would be my best week!
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Seven days

So, it's the second day of my "one-week writing" challenge and the subject for the 7t March is "Seven days". If I woke up tomorrow morning to find all my plans have been cancelled for the next seven days and $10.000 on my dresser, I would be luckiest man on the planet. My next seven days will look like a dream! I will be finally able to do things which I have wanted to do for a long time.
Firstly, I will buy a travel tour for my mom, may be to France or Bali. She has been working for a long time without a rest, so she really need this vacation!
Then I will travel to Milan to go to shops which are known as the best shops in the world! Prada, Valentino.... ohhh...
And after all I will go to Sicily, because I have been dreaming about a sea since autumn! I will be there 3 or 4 days!
Finally, I will come back to Moscow and meet with my best friend!
I really haven't free time because of the university, so a week without it will be my best week ever!


Because you are talking about a hypothetical holiday it would make more sense to use Would instead of Will.

Be careful with big numbers $4.00 = four dollars but $4,000 = four thousand dollars

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