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What he reminds me. Today, I met a man for the first time. I confess my personal problem and discontent for my job to him. I actually want to quit my job. However, he pointed out my weaknesses and advised me from two perspectives. He mentioned to me to quit the job, if I want. In the other hand, he mentioned there would be worth experience if I go over the problem. To tell the truth, when he asked me "Why you want to quit your job?", I could not tell a concrete answer. I, actually, want more time to study English, and cannot make some time to study because of my job. But his point reminds me that the time I want to study could be made by my efforts and it is not because of my job. Blaming someone unconsciously is my weakness, and today he realized to me. My mind revolution would change my surrounding. To change environment would not change myself at all.
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What he reminds me.

Today, I met a man for the first time.
I confessed my personal problem and discontent for my job to him.
I actually want to quit my job.
However, he pointed out my weaknesses and advised me from two perspectives.
He mentioned to me to quit the job, if I wanted to. On the other hand, he mentioned that it would be worth experience if I go over the problem.
To tell the truth, when he asked me "Why you want to quit your job?", I could not give a concrete answer.
I, actually, want more time to study English, and cannot make some time to study because of my job.
But his point reminds me that the time I want to study could be made by my efforts and it is not because of my job.
Blaming someone unconsciously is my weakness, and today he revealed that to me.
My mind's revolution would change my surroundings. To change environment would not change me at all.

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