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Helpful people Hi everyone ! Yesterday I writed four people in here about french and english. All of them answered me with lovely. Someone said "how can i help you", someone said "when we are start". Someone said nothing :)) but added me as a friend. Here is a nice platform with wonderful people. They gave me a big smiley. Thanks to all :)) have a nice day.
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Hi everyone ! Yesterday I wrote to writed (1)four people in here about French and English (2). All of them were lovely and answered me with lovely. Someone asked, said "How can I help you?" (3) and someone asked, said "When we are start?" Someone said nothing :)) but added me as a friend. ThisHere is a nice platform with wonderful people. They gave me a warm welcome big smiley. Thanks to all of you :)) Have a nice day.

Hi Hakki,

A warm welcome to Italki. There are many helpful members here who are eager to lend a helping hand. 

Just a few suggestions for you: 

(1) The past tense of "write" is "wrote. The past participle of "write" is "written". 

(2) As you are referring to a specific language, "English" and "French" are proper nouns and the first letter should be capitalised. 

(3) For a dialogue, there is a comma before the starting quotation mark. For example: Tom said, "I am Tom." 

Hope this helps.

Cheers,

Lance 

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Hi everyone ! Yesterday I writed  wrote four people in here about French and English. All of them answered me with lovely love. Someone said "how can i help you", someone said "when do we are start". Someone said nothing :)) but added me as a friend. Here This is a nice platform with wonderful people. They gave me a big smiley smile. Thanks to all :)) have a nice day.
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