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Hi Lilli,
I would be happy to make some suggestions on your English. The main suggestion I have is to organize your thoughts, so I rearranged your entry that way.
Canoeing and Kayaking, from a beginner's point of view.
Practicing kanoe kayak
Hello to you who takes time to read my notebook entry!I did kayak once in my home country. I waited a long time because I am not really a sporty person. I like individual sports like (give examples) I love nature, doing simple trekking and swimming. When I think about it, kayaking is logical for me because it offers most of what I like from other sports; contemplating nature, calming my nerves and being in the water. I also like yoga and practice it every morning because it is so relaxing and calming.
But I am not good at team sports, especially ones with balls. .
I am not living in my birthplace now. In fact I am living in another country: the UK. I am living in a seaside resort area. However, I will do go river kayaking not sea kayaking. I want to try sea kayaking one day but first I want to feel comfortable kayaking down a river. I love changeS of landscapes at each (maybe you mean) bend in the river watershed. The river I'll ride is really calm. I might try roughER water when I acquire more experiences. J'espère que vous trouverez mes suggestions utiles. Moi, j'étude le Français. Ted
Thank you for taking time to correct it. :-)
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