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Carlos Navarro
Good morning friends! I need some corrections on this next text: (thank you in advance) Dear Mrs. XXX It is my pleasure to salutate you. My name is Carlos Navarro and I am a student in the undergraduate Biology program at Universidad Simón Bolívar in Caracas, Venezuela. I am currently attending the last year out of a 5 year study program and I am working in the Laboratory of Nutritional Assesment of my university, directly collaborating with head of laboratory, Professor Hector Herrera, in the assessing of different populations anthropometric mesurements, but since I am more interested in the field of nutrigenomics and nutrigenetics I am therefore looking for some opportunities to develop my career in that specific field. This trimester I am developing a seminar about the PPARg nuclear receptor and the polymorphisms of the gene that influences the development of obesity in humans, and I actually came across with your recent work on the subject and I am using it as a reference for my seminar. My university program requires I complete a trainee or internship and I am actively looking for opportunities abroad to work on a research project in the field of nutrigenomics or nutrigenetics. I have heard my university has exchange agreements with Uppsala Unviersitet and I know of one or two fellow Biology that are currently participitating in research groups at Uppsala. I am very interested in being part of a research project at Uppsala, and would welcome a chance to discuss further opportunities for research study.

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I need some corrections on this next text: (thank you in advance) Dear Mrs. XXX It is my pleasure to salutate you. My name is Carlos Navarro and I am a student in the undergraduate Biology program at Universidad Simón Bolívar in Caracas, Venezuela. I am currently attending the last year out of a 5 year study program and I am working in the Laboratory of Nutritional Assesment of at my university, directly collaborating with the head of the laboratory, Professor Hector Herrera. We are in the assessing of different populations using anthropometric mesurements, but since I am more interested in the field of nutrigenomics and nutrigenetics I am therefore looking for some opportunities to develop my career knowledge in that specific field. This trimester I am developing a seminar about the PPARg nuclear receptor and the polymorphisms of the gene that influences the development of obesity in humans, and I actually came across with your recent work on the subject and I am using it as a reference for my seminar. My university program requires me to complete a trainee or internship program and so I am actively looking for opportunities abroad to work on a research project in the field of nutrigenomics or nutrigenetics. I have heard my university has exchange agreements with Uppsala Unviersitet and I know of one or two fellow Biology students that who are currently participitating in research groups at Uppsala. I am very interested in being part of a research project at Uppsala and would welcome a chance to discuss further opportunities for research study.

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