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Finish my IELTS exam and be back to italki (welcom any corrections to my essay ) After doing IELTS related exercises for around six months, I have finished my IELTS exam. Although I failed to attain my goal, which is to get 7.0 for writing, I still decided to stop intensive preparations for IELTS since I felt sick and tired of doing nothing but practicing writing, listening, reading and speaking in a boring way. The good news of my IELTS exam is I got 7.0 for my speaking, which is beyond my wildest dream. In fact, I am always thinking about devote myself to wiring practice, because I really desire to study teaching in NZ, which requires applicants to get four 7s in each section of IELTS. And from my point of view, as I have already reach a relatively high level as for other three aspects of English learning, my possible IELTS preparations could be easier than before. However, just as you know, altering easy life to hard one, people need courage. So I have struggled to weigh up the pros and cons and make the best choice in my life.

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Finish my IELTS exam and be get back to italki (welcom any corrections to my essay are welcome)

After doing IELTS related exercises for around six months, I have finished my IELTS exam. Although I failed to attain my goal, which is to get 7.0 for writing, I still decided to stop intensive preparations for IELTS since I felt sick and tired of doing nothing but practicing writing, listening, reading and speaking in a boring way. The good news of (about, surrounding) my IELTS exam is that I got 7.0 for my speaking, which is beyond my wildest dream.

In fact, I am always thinking about devote devoting myself to wiring writing practice, because I really desire to study teaching in NZ, which requires applicants to get four 7s in each section of IELTS. And from my point of view, as I have already reach reached a relatively high level as for in the other three aspects of English learning, my possible IELTS preparations could be easier than before. However, just as you know, when altering an easy life to a hard one, people need courage. So, I have struggled to weigh up the pros and cons and make the best choice in my life.
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