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Johanna Muñoz
#8 The fair in Chile The fair in Chile is, tired sellers are put in a street with him products. They are sell fruit, veggetables, fish, eggs. Like a little market. Else you can found food step, fruit juice, patty, puffed corn and others. This morning I was to the fair near of my house. I buy bananas, grapes, oranges, lettuces, patatoes, and green beans.

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The fair in In Chile is, tired sellers are put in a street with him vendors sell their products in outdoor markets called ferias. They are sell fruit, veggetables, fish, and eggs. It is Like a little market.
Else You can found find food step, fruit juice, hamburger patties, puffed corn and others more.
This morning, I was went to the fair feria near of my house. I buy bought bananas, grapes, oranges, lettuces lettuce (it's plural), patatoes potatoes, and green beans.



Me encantan las ferias Chilenas!! Vivi en Chile por casi 2 anos en total, y cuando hablo de la feria con otros gringos, digo feria. Fair no tiene mucho sentido. Tambien podrias decir farmers market u outdoor market

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#8 The fair in Chile

At the fair in Chile there are tired sellers putting products in the street. They are selling fruit, vegetables, fish and eggs. Like a little market.
You can find food, fruit juice, patties, puffed corn and other things.
This morning I was at the fair near my house. I bought bananas, grapes, oranges, lettuces, potatoes, and green beans.

Not bad Johanna, just some grammar mistakes. Hope this helps :)

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#8 The Fair in Chile {Main words in titles are capitalized in English composition}

The fair in Chile is, tired sellers are put on a street with him their [1] products. They are sell fruits, vegetables, fish, and eggs, like a little market. [2]
Elsewhere, you can found food step ingredients/staples (?)[3], fruit juice, {beef?} patties, [4] puffed corn, and others.
This morning, I was to the fair near of my house. I buy bought [5] bananas, grapes, oranges, lettuces, patatoes, and green beans.


[1] Refers to sellers, so "their".

[2] "Like a little market" is not a complete sentence since there is no verb, so you cannot have it as a standalone sentence.

[3] I don't know what you mean by "food steps."

[4] "Patties" is too general a term.

[5] "This morning" signifies the past.

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