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Ching Chih
Please help to correct (I am studying for a master's degree and write my thesis in french. But I have to write a short abstract in English. So I need someone to help me.) In the first part of this thesis, in order to better understand how the film is the soft power of the country, and the support of France for film development, we will first focus on the origin of the film, and then we will observe how France resists the cultural hegemony of the United States. In the second part, we investigate the differences of film institutions between Taiwan and France. The last part, we will take the Cannes Film Festival and the Taipei Golden Horse Film Festival as the examples to understand the background of the film festival and the interaction of international films. Finally, we expect that this studying could offer Taiwan a direction in long-terms operation and to seek opportunities for international cooperation.
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Please help to correct:

(I am studying for a master's degree and I am writing my thesis in french, but I have to write a short abstract in English so I need someone to help me.)

In the first part of this thesis, in order to better understand how film* is the soft power of a country and how France supports film development, we will focus on the origin of film and observe how France resists the cultural hegemony of the United States.** In the second part, we will*** investigate the differences between film institutions in Taiwan and France. In the last part, we will take the Cannes Film Festival and the Taipei Golden Horse Film Festival as examples to understand better the background of film festivals and the interaction of international films. Finally, we explain how**** this study could offer Taiwan direction for long-term operation and help it seek opportunities for international cooperation.

Notes:

* The phrase "the film" suggests a specific film, whereas I believe here the intent is to refer to the subject of film as a general topic, in which case "film" should be used without the definite article

** I took a few liberties with the changes by adding and deleting some words, but believe it reflects the original intent

*** Since the future tense is used elsewhere, it should be used here as well for consistency

**** I believe this conveys the intended meaning (that is ,in a thesis you would explain or summarize your conclusion, not simply "expect that" they could or might do something)

I hope that helps!

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Please help to correct

(I am studying for a master's degree and write my thesis in french.
But I have to write a short abstract in English. So I need someone to help me.)

In the first part of this thesis, in order to better understand film is the soft power of France, and the governments support of film development, we will focus on the origin of film, and then we will observe how France resists the cultural hegemony of the United States. In the second part, we investigate the differences between French and Taiwanese film institutions. in the last part, we will use the Cannes Film Festival and the Taipei Golden Horse Film Festival as the examples to understand the underlying elements of the film festival and the interaction between international films. Finally, we believe that understanding this will offer Taiwan a direction in the long-term, and help create opportunities for international cooperation.

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