My letter of application for my class on Tuesday
Hi to all my unknown mates.
I must to write my letter of application, and I really don't like it. The letter is about English speakers volunteers required for a musical festival.
Dear Paul.
I have read your advertisement on "the Galaxy news", and I would like to apply for the post of volunteer on the pop and rock festival.
I am a fan of music, specially Spanish, psychedellic and symphonic rock.
Although I only play the triangle the tambourine and the zambomba, I have a long experience working with people, specially young people, because I have been volunteer several years as assistant on summer campus for Erasmus students on Spain.
I reckon I would be suitable for this job because I am very cheerful, talkative and helpful. I can also speak French, Spanish, and Catalan.
I would love to have the opportunity to help other people to enjoy music as I do.
Finally I think I would learn a lot of new musical trends.
Yours faithfully.
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My letter of application for my class on Tuesday
Hi to all my unknown mates.I must to write my a letter applying for a position as a volunteer, and I really don't like it. The position would be working with English speakers at a musical festival.
Dear Paul,
I have read your advertisement in "the Galaxy news", and I would like to apply to volunteer at the pop and rock festival.
I am a fan of music, especially Spanish music, psychedelic music, and symphonic rock.
Although I only play the triangle, the tambourine, and the zambomba, I have extensive experience working with people, especially young people, because I have volunteered for several years as an assistant at summer camps for Erasmus students in Spain.
I reckon I would be suitable for this job because I am very cheerful, talkative, and helpful. I can also speak French, Spanish, and Catalan.
I would love to have the opportunity to help other people to enjoy music as [much as] I do.
Finally, I think I would learn a lot of new musical styles?.
Yours faithfully.
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My letter of application for my class on Tuesday
Hi to all my unknown mates (comma or colon here)I must need to write my letter of application, and I really don't like it. The letter is about English speakersing volunteers required for a musical festival.
Dear Paul.(comma or colon here)
I have read your advertisement on "the Galaxy News,", and I would like to apply for the post of volunteer on at the pop and rock festival.
I am a fan of music, especially Spanish music, psychedellic psychedelic and symphonic rock.
Although I only play the triangle, the tambourine, and the zambomba, I have a long lot of experience working with people, especially young people, because I have been a volunteer for several years as an assistant on in summer campus for Erasmus students on in Spain.
I reckon I would be suitable for this job because I am very cheerful, talkative and helpful. I can also speak French, Spanish, and Catalan.
I would love to have the opportunity to help other people to enjoy music as much as I do.
Finally I think I would learn a lot of new musical trends.
Yours faithfully.
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