Walk around the park
The weather is cold and cold，willow leaves also fell reluctantly，the lake was completely covered with ice，Wild ducks who play in the lake on weekdays are gone，only some crushed ice lay quietly on the smooth ice surface，appears slightly without artistic conception。
Many people are exercising，walking, running, Taijiquan or square dancing，The mood is strong.
But the air quality is not good.
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Walk around the park
The weather is cold and cold, the willow leaves also are falling fell reluctantly, the lake was is completely covered with ice. The wild ducks who that* played in the lake on weekdays are gone, only some crushed ice lay lies quietly on the smooth ice surface, appearing slightly without artistic conception. Many people are exercising, walking, running, Taijiquan or square dancing. The mood is strong.But the air quality is not good.
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I didn't know whether it was intended to be past tense or present, so I used the latter in my corrections.
* - in English, "who" is used when speaking about humans. When referring to nonhuman animals, we use "which" or "that".
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انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!
لا تفوّت فرصة تعلّم لغة جديدة وأنت مرتاح في منزلك. تصفّح مجموعتنا المختارة من مدرّسي اللغات ذوي الخبرة وسجّل في درسك الأول الآن!
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