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Homework necessary or unneccessary ? Part II There are some disadvantages in it. On the individual scale, it harms the creativity of students because of long time training on young ages, even though they do have better skills when they grow up, it may not big deal for their life, but on the societal scale, the society consisted by every person who lacks creativity, it will be a tragedy in science and art. It will lose the dominate in some industries for those countries due to the creative invention in other countries. In conclusion, I agree that homework is beneficial to student skills, because practice make perfect. I do believe some students have inclines on study by themselves, they may study more efficiently by it.
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Is homework necessary or unnecessary ? Part II

There are some disadvantages to it. On an individual scale, it harms the creativity of students because of [or due to]  long time extensive training on young ages, even though they do have better skills require more important skills when they grow up. It may not be a big deal for their life [for them | in their lives] On the societal scale, the society it consisted consists by of every person who lacks creativity. It will be a tragedy for science and art. It will lose the dominate in some Industries will lose dominance for in those their country due to the creative invention of other countries.

In conclusion, I agree that homework is beneficial to a student skills, because [as] practice make perfect. I do believe some students have inclines  are inclined to on study by themselves. They may be more efficient.
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Is Homework necessary or unneccessary ? Part II

There are some disadvantages in  to it. On the/an individual scale, it harms the creativity of students because of the long time spent training on at young ages, even though they do may/will have better skills when they grow up, it may not big deal for their life, but . On the societal scale of the whole society, the society consisted by every which consists of a lot of people person who lacks creativity, it will be a tragedy in science and art. It will lose the dominate domination in some industries for those countries due to the creative invention in other countries.

In conclusion, I agree that homework is beneficial to student skills, because practice make perfect. I do believe some students have inclines on an inclination to study by themselves, they may study more efficiently by it because of this.

Lots of nice use of good quality vocabulary - harms creativity, skills, grow up, a big deal, lack creativity, etc.

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