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The Tale of Peter Rabbit I am going to tell you the story of a little rabbit. His name was Peter; he had three brothers Flopsy, Mopsy and Cotton-tail. They lived with their mother underneath the roots of a big old tree. One day the mother had to go out, so she said to the little rabbits that they couldn’t go too far of the tree where they lived and no matter what they did, they couldn’t go to Mr. McGregor’s garden. After that the Mrs. Rabbit took a hamper and her umbrella to leave their home. Flopsy, Mopsy and Cotton-tail were good so they went to gather blackberries, however the forth brother wasn’t too good, with his blue jacket and white shoes left his brothers to go to Mr. McGregor’s garden. Peter was naughty and curious, once he reached the garden he sneaked underneath the front door and saw an old man harvesting all kind of vegetables. The little rabbit hide and ate everything he could, when Mr. McGregor noticed he was there the old man ran as fast as he could to scare away the intruder. After a little fight Peter could escape but not without losing his favorite shoes. The little rabbit tried to get out of there but the farmer was decided to catch him. When Mr. McGregor saw Peter again he ran to get him but he climbed up the garden’s fence to get free though our little friend lost his new jacket. Once he got home his mother was speechless because Peter was exhausted and couldn`t find out why, so his mother gave him chamomile tea and put him in bed to rest hoping for his best.
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The Tale of Peter Rabbit

I am going to tell you the story of a little rabbit. His name was Peter; he had three brothers Flopsy, Mopsy and Cotton-tail. They lived with their mother underneath the roots of a big old tree.

One day the mother had to go out, so she said to the little rabbits that they couldn’t not to go too far of  past the tree where they lived; and above all, no matter what they did, they couldn’t go to Mr. McGregor’s garden. After that the Mrs. Rabbit took her hamper (suggestion: basket) and her umbrella to leave and left their home.

Flopsy, Mopsy and Cotton-tail were good so they went to gather blackberries, however the forth brother wasn’t too as good (suggestion: well-behaved) , with his blue jacket and white shoes he left his brothers to go to Mr. McGregor’s garden. Peter was naughty and curious, once he reached the garden he  snuck underneath beneath the front door and saw an old man harvesting all kinds of vegetables.

The little rabbit hide and ate everything he could, when Mr. McGregor noticed he was there the old man ran as fast as he could to scare away the intruder. After a little fight Peter could escaped but not without losing his favorite shoes. The little rabbit tried to get out of there but the farmer was  decided determined to catch him.

When Mr. McGregor saw Peter again he ran to get chased after him but Peter climbed (suggestion: scrambledup the garden’s fence to get free though and our little friend lost his new jacket. When he finally got (suggestion: returned) home his mother was speechless. because Peter was exhausted and she couldn`t find understand why, so his mother gave him chamomile tea and put him in bed to rest hoping for his best.


Good job!! :) 




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