First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm nancy and I'm am glad to be come here where I can learn English with others.  Also,I'm glad hoping to communicate with others.I want to communicate with others frequently. My English is not so good, and so I need the help of others to help.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm nancy. I'm glad to come here where I can learn  English with others. Also, I'm glad to and communicate with others. I want to communicate with people frequently. My English is not so good, so I need to help with it.

Avoid repeating the same word like: others...  the repeatition makes the text poorer, use synonyms instead.