14th of January - ThousandS Of These Days

This morning I woke up a bit earlier than usual. I prepared A LARGE BREAKFAST with care and abundance the breakfast and went to wake up my love. I caressed his head and I genlty GENTLY moved the duvet so I could go GET into his bed. I hugged him AS HE LAY half asleep and I kissed his temple. He turned and smiled to me. My love today is eight years old and I wanted that his first feeling today was WOULD BE the unconditional warmth and love of a HIS mother.
Happy Birthday, my Treasure.

Bellissima! Tanti auguri a lui. Veramente e' fortunato avere una madre come te.

14th of January - Thousand Of These Days

This morning I woke up a bit earlier than usual. I prepared with care and abundance the sumptuous breakfast with care, then and went to wake up my love. I caressed his head and I genlty moved the duvet so I could get into his bed. I hugged him with him still half asleep and I kissed his temple. He turned and smiled to me. My love today is eight years old and I wanted that his first feeling today was the unconditional warmth and love of a mother.
Happy Birthday, my Treasure.

[Very good.  Subtle differences in word order]