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Today was a very good day. Yesterday, I came back to my hometown. This morning, I went to get laser hair removal. Then I had lunch with my family at my favorite sushi restaurant. After that, I got a lash lift. My eyelashes look really nice, so I’m very happy. One of my hometown friends came back from studying in Australia today. We are going to meet tonight for the first time in six months and eat ramen at Yamaokaya. I love Yamaokaya’s ramen, so I’m really happy to go there again. I want to hear all about my friend’s life in Australia. Tomorrow, I am going to my relative’s wedding. I will wear the new dress, shoes, and bag that I bought yesterday. I heard the food at the wedding venue is very delicious, so I’m really looking forward to it. I also hope I can find someone special and fall in love soon.
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Today was a very good day. Yesterday, I came back to my hometown. This morning, I went to get laser hair removal treatment. Then, I had lunch with my family at my favourite sushi restaurant. After that, I got a lash lift. My eyelashes look really nice, so I am very happy. One of my hometown friends came back from studying in Australia today. We are going to meet tonight for the first time in six months and eat ramen at Yamaokaya. I love Yamaokaya’s ramen, so I am really happy to go there again. I want to hear all about my friend’s life in Australia. Tomorrow, I am going to my relative’s wedding. I will wear the new dress, shoes, and bag that I bought yesterday. I heard that the food at the wedding venue is very delicious, so I am really looking forward to it. I also hope I can find someone special and fall in love soon.
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Today has been a very good day. Yesterday, I came back to my hometown. This morning, I went to get laser hair removal. Then I had lunch with my family at my favorite sushi restaurant. After that, I got a lash lift. My eyelashes look really nice, so I’m very happy. One of my hometown friends came back from studying in Australia today. We are going to meet tonight for the first time in six months and eat ramen at Yamaokaya. I love Yamaokaya’s ramen, so I’m really happy to go there again. I want to hear all about my friend’s life in Australia. Tomorrow, I am going to my relative’s wedding. I will wear the new dress, shoes, and bag that I bought yesterday. I heard the food at the wedding venue is utterly delicious, so I’m really looking forward to it. I also hope I can find someone special and fall in love soon.
Great work! As the day isn't over and you are going out later, you need to say it 'has been' good. Also 'delicious' is an extreme adjective, so using 'very' would somehow make it weaker, not stronger. So it has to be 'utterly', 'totally', 'so' delicious, etc.
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