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Rosie
Hi, there:)
Could you please help me proofreading the paragraph below?
Thank you~
Since 2007, the Promotion Plan of Travel Industry Crisis Management of Florida University have already conducted the survey from typhoon to Zca virus and many disaster that cause treat to the travel industry.
Start from the January, under the threaten of corona virus, this plan start the comprehensive survey to investigate their view of corona virus's crisis and those infect to the decision make in the future travel. In the latest survey, on the first week in April, conduct on 517 interviewers, almost 74% people stated that they feel anxious on the travel in United State.
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I can help! In your first sentence you should change "disaster" to "disasters," because it is plural in this case. I am assuming that you meant to say that the disasters were harming the travel industry, so I would not say "cause treat," I would say, "that cause problems for" . In the beginning of your second paragraph, you should say, "from the start of January," because "start from the January," is a bit of an unnatural sentence. Instead of saying "the threaten of the corona virus," you should say "the threat of the Coronavirus." Coronavirus is one word, so be sure to combine it, and possibly capitalize it. You should remove the S after the apostrophe in the same sentence, because the s only goes after the ' if s is not present at the end of the word, with some exceptions. Lastly, you should change "that they feel anxious on the travel," to "that they feel anxious traveling in the United States." I'm sorry that I could only respond in English, and I did not correct everything, but I hope this helps.
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Rosie
المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (التايوانية), الإنجليزية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية
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