Kai
Move my bedroom, and travel around london. 1. My room is really comfortable and larger so my mom asks me to give up my room to my brother. 2. Did you eat good food when you travelled around London? 3. Did you eat good food during this trip? 4. I bet you had a great time. 5. I will become very busy in the next three days because my brother is getting married. 7. I have been busy moving my stuff to another room these last few days because my brother is getting married. 8. I and my brother usually sleep together when he comes home but he has a wife now and we cannot sleep together anymore so my mom asked me to move out. 9. He and his wife works in other state of Malaysia.
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Move my bedroom, and travel around london. 1. My room is really comfortable and larger than my brother’s, so my mom asked me to give up my room to him. 2. Did you eat good food when you travelled around London? 3. Did you eat good food during this trip? 4. I bet you had a great time. 5. I will be very busy in the next three days because my brother is getting married. 7. I have been busy moving my stuff to another room these last few days because my brother is getting married. 8. My brother and I usually sleep together when he comes home, but he has a wife now and we cannot sleep together anymore so my mom asked me to move out. 9. He and his wife work in another state of Malaysia.
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Thanks a lot
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Move my bedroom, and travel around london. 1. My room is really big and comfortable so my mom asked me to give up my room to my brother. 2. Did you eat good food when you travelled around London? 3. Did you eat good food during this trip? 4. I bet you had a great time. 5. I will become very busy over the next three days because my brother is getting married. 7. I have been busy moving my stuff to another room for the last few days because my brother is getting married. 8. My brother and I usually sleep in the same room together when he comes home but he has a wife now and we cannot sleep in the same room anymore so my mom asked me to move out. 9. He and his wife works in another state of Malaysia.
Very good, well done!
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Kai
المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (المندرية), الصينية (الكانتونية), الصينية (الهوكينية), الإنجليزية, الإندونيسية, الملايوية, الروسية
لغة التعلّم
الصينية (الكانتونية), الإنجليزية, الإندونيسية, الملايوية, الروسية