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Saddam Hussain
Please identify the mistakes in the email if I have made, and please suggest me the best possible version of this email.
Hi there, I hope you are doing well. My name is Saddam Hussain, I have got admission in biomedical sciences, also I am the winner of Excellence Scholarship for International Students.
I am sending you this email to inform you about the delay in issuance of my visa by the Italian embassy, therefore I will not be able to attend the classes on 25th September. So, I want to inform you about situations and also take guidance from you. Also, I want to know, if I arrive late in the university will I face any problem there?
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Please identify the mistakes in the email if I have made any. And please, suggest
the best alternative
To whomever it may concern,
My name is Saddam Hussain, I live in X, I have got admission in the university of X to study Biomedical Sciences .
I am sending you this email to inform you about the delay in issuance of my visa by the
Italian embassy. This delay makes impossible for me to attend classes on 25th
September. I would like to know whether this could cause any problems and whether there is something that you think I should do about it. Maybe, email my teachers or the headmaster.
Thanks so much in advance.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards
Your name
I've removed everything that wasn't relevant and kept a high register. Maybe, the latter wasn't necessary but it's better to be a bit too polite than Impolite.
I hope it's useful.
Cheers!
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المدعو
Dear [Recipient's Name], I hope this email finds you well. My name is Saddam Hussain, and I have recently been accepted into the biomedical sciences program at [University/Organization Name]. I am reaching out to inform you about a slight delay in the processing of my visa by the Italian embassy. Unfortunately, this means that I will be unable to attend the classes scheduled for September 25th. I wanted to notify you of this situation and seek your guidance on how to proceed. Furthermore, I would appreciate any information or assistance you can provide regarding any potential issues that may arise if I arrive at the university later than initially planned. Thank you for your attention to this matter, and I look forward to your response. Best regards, Saddam Hussain
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المدعو
Dear [Recipient's Name],
I hope this email finds you well. My name is Saddam Hussain, and I have recently been accepted into the biomedical sciences program at [University/Organization Name].
I am reaching out to inform you about a slight delay in the processing of my visa by the Italian embassy. Unfortunately, this means that I will be unable to attend the classes scheduled for September 25th. I wanted to notify you of this situation and seek your guidance on how to proceed.
Furthermore, I would appreciate any information or assistance you can provide regarding any potential issues that may arise if I arrive at the university later than initially planned.
Thank you for your attention to this matter, and I look forward to your response.
Best regards,
Saddam Hussain
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Saddam Hussain
المهارات اللغوية
الإنجليزية, البشتوية, الأُردية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية
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