Mari Kim
3. Question) Describe a memorable teacher to you. How did he or she influence your life? My answer)When I look back and think about teachers that had a impact on me, I can think of one teacher who taught me math in a middle school. He was a teacher that recognized my weakness and tried to counsel me. When I was in school, I was a very, very shy person, so the last thing I wanted to do is doing presentation. One day I was supposed to do prsentation in class, but I couldn't get it done because I was so nervous, and this teacher recognized I had a real serious shy problem, and he would give a lot of encouragement. And with these lots of encouragement, over time I started to gain a little bit more confidence. It made it big difference for me. He was also known for his own teaching method in school. He taught us math. Sadly I didn't remember his name but I called him 'DDongDangu teacher'. The reason why I called him 'DDongDangu teacher' is he used to say 'DDongDangu' when he explained a certain concept in class. I mean, when he needed to explain some difficult concepts to us he would explain in his own style in such a way that it straight went into long term memory. He used lots of hand gestures and gave examples. I didn't keep in touch with him after avmiddle school, but he still sticks in my mind. Could you please make my writing more natural? Thank you so much. 질문) 당신에게 기억에 남는 선생님을 묘사하세요. 그 혹은 그녀가 당신의 삶에 어떤 영향을 미쳤나요? 내 대답) 나에게 영향을 준 선생님들에 대해 생각할 때, 나는 중학교에서 수학을 가르쳐 주신 선생님 한 분을 떠올릴 수 있습니다. 그는 나의 부족함을 알아보시고 조언을 해주려고 했던 선생님이었습니다. 나는 학교 다닐 때 굉장히 수줍음이 많은 사람이었기 때문에 발표는 정말 하기 싫었어요. 하루는 수업시간에 발표를 하기로 했는데 너무 긴장해서 제대로 끝내지를 못했어요. 이 선생님은 제가 정말 심각한 수줍음 문제가 있다는 것을 알아주셨고, 많은 격려를 해주셨습니다. 그리고 이렇게 격려를 해주면서 시간이 지나면서 저는 조금 더 자신감을 갖게 되었습니다. 그것은 나에게 큰 변화를 만들어 주었습니다. 그 선생님은 또한 학교에서 자신만의 교수법으로 알려져 있었다. 그는 우리에게 수학을 가르쳤어요. 안타깝게도 선생님의 이름은 기억하지 못했지만 나는 그를 '똥당구 선생님'이라고 불렀습니다. 제가 '똥당구 선생님'이라고 부른 이유는 수업 시간에 어떤 개념을 설명할 때 '똥당구'라고 말하곤 했어요. 어려운 개념을 설명할 필요가 있을 때 그는 자신의 스타일로 설명해 우리가 오래 기억할 수 있게
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Please find below an alternative version to your piece of writing: —- When I think back on teachers who had an impact on me, one teacher who taught me math in middle school comes to mind. He was a teacher who recognized and tried to advise me on my weakness. When I was in school, I was very shy, so giving a presentation was the last thing on my mind. I was supposed to give a presentation in class one day, but I couldn't because I was too nervous, and this teacher recognized that it was a serious problem so, he encouraged me. He kept doing so, and I gradually began to gain a little more confidence. It made a significant difference for me. He was also well-known in school for his unique teaching style. He taught us how to do math. Unfortunately, I don't remember his name, but I referred to him as 'DDongDangu teacher.' I called him 'DDongDangu teacher' because he used to say 'DDongDangu' in class when explaining a concept. I mean, when he needed to explain a difficult concept to us, he did so in his own unique style in such a way that it immediately went into long term memory. He used a variety of hand gestures. I lost contact with him after middle school, but he remains in my memory. —— Hi Mari, how are you doing? You did a good job. Well done. Practice makes perfect!
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