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Yesterday, after work, I ate staff food for the first time in a while. My friend made a steak rice bowl for me, and it was very delicious. After that, I met up with the people who had worked at the Shibuya store, and we went out for drinks. Everyone was tired, but after we started drinking, we had a lot of fun and talked for a long time. I had drunk with some of the same people before, but I had never drunk with exactly the same members, so it was fresh and fun. After that, we went to play darts. I am not very good at darts, but playing darts with everyone was really fun. I want to play darts with everyone again. Today, I have to go all the way to Shibuya for work. I don’t understand why I have to be sent to Shibuya when I am only a part-time worker. I wanted to call in sick, but everyone else had work today, so I decided to do my best too. I haven’t worked for eight hours in a long time, so it will probably be hard. I hope I can somehow finish the whole shift.

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Yesterday, after work, I ate a staff meal for the first time in a while. My friend made a steak rice bowl for me, and it was absolutely delicious. After that, I met up with some people who had worked at the Shibuya branch, and we went out for drinks. Everyone was tired, but once we started drinking, we had a lot of fun and talked for a long time. I had been out for drinks with some of them before, but I had never been out with exactly the same group, so it felt fresh and enjoyable. Afterwards, we went to play darts. I’m not very good at darts, but playing with everyone was really fun. I’d love to play darts with them again. Today, I have to go all the way to Shibuya for work. I don’t understand why I have to work there when I’m only a part-time employee. I wanted to call in sick, but everyone else had to work today, so I decided to do my best as well. I haven’t worked an eight-hour shift in a long time, so it will probably be difficult. I hope I can get through the whole shift.
Level: C1. This is a strong piece of writing. You tell a detailed story, express your opinions naturally, and connect events smoothly. Your grammar is generally very accurate, and your vocabulary is varied. The main improvements involve idiomatic expressions (especially those related to socialising and work) and a few more natural collocations. You're writing at a solid C1 level. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊

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