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Hanna
I really really enjoyed last summer while I was on holiday in Shenzhen.It was the last week of November, and we set off on the walk on the first morning of the holiday just after breakfast🥐.
It was a sunny day but it got pretty windy🌬.We followed the coast path for several miles in a bay park of Shenzhen (my favorite place there) until we felt tired.And it had a charming scenery as it was near the sea!! A variety of species of birds flied in the sky🥳Many people there that afternoon, some of them were cycling, some of them were just taking simple seaside walk like us……Time seemed to rest….
Then we climbed mountain until we saw the magnificent and incredible sunset in the top of hill.😯
Coincidentally ,we also saw a jet aircraft that afternoon!!!! Sweet day with unforgettable scenery.🤔🤔
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I really really enjoyed last summer while I was on holiday in Shenzhen.It was
the last week of November, and we set off on the walk on the first morning of
the holiday just after breakfast🥐. It was a sunny day, but after a short while, it got pretty
windy🌬.We followed the coast for several miles in a bay park of Shenzhen
(my favorite place there) until we felt tired. It had charming scenery as
it was near the sea!! A variety of species of birds were flying in the sky🥳Many
people were there that afternoon, some of them were cycling, some of them were just
simply walking along the seaside like us……Time seemed to stand still…. Then we climbed the
mountain until we were able to see the magnificent and incredible sunset from atop the hill.😯 We also saw a jet aircraft that same afternoon!!!! What a sweet day
with unforgettable scenery.🤔🤔
Great job Hanna! A few corrections but nothing major and descriptive writing/speaking is very difficult, so well done! 😁
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Hanna
المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية
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