Kelly
My plans are not special planned, draw,tidy up my room,play games and learn English,my favorite activity is drawing,I draw illustrations everyday. I will move to my hometown recently,so I must be most items send my home,and keep the room clean until I leave here. Playing games is the one of my intrestings,taking time isn't much,about 2~4 hours,time is precious,I hope use it to important things. Learning English is the one of my goals,and I plan it everyday,even on holiday. My weekend plans are the same as weekdays,I do there things everyday,only is something special,I seriously plan it.
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My plans are not special, I want to draw, tidy up my room, play games and learn English. My favorite activity is drawing and I draw illustrations everyday. I will move to my hometown recently, so I must send most of my itens home and keep my room clean until I leave from here. Playing games is one of my interests, and it doesn't take much time, just about 2-4 hours and time is precious, so I hope to spend it doing important things. Learning English is one of my goals, and I plan to do it everyday, even on holiday. My weekend plans are the same as what I do on the weekdays, I do things everyday, but I only plan it thoroughly when I'm going to do something special.
keep working! :)
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My plans are not special planned, draw,tidy up my room,play games and learn English,my favorite activity is drawing,I draw illustrations everyday. I will move to my hometown recently,so I must be most items send my home,and keep the room clean until I leave here. Playing games is the one of my intrestings,taking time isn't much,about 2~4 hours,time is precious,I hope use it to important things. Learning English is the one of my goals,and I plan it everyday,even on holiday. My weekend plans are the same as weekdays,I do there things everyday,only is something special,I seriously plan it. We can't say "I will move to my hometown recently" because "I will move" expresses something that will happen in the future" and "recently" is used to describe something that has happened in the past. I think you want to say "I will move to my hometown soon". I hope that helps.
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My plans aren't special. I plan to draw, tidy up my room, play games, and learn English. My favorite hobby is drawing and I draw illustrations everyday. I will move to my hometown soon, so I have to send most of my items home and keep my room clean until I leave. Playing games is also one of my hobbies. I only spend 2-4 hours a day playing games but time is precious so I hope I start spending my time doing more important things. Learning English is one of my goals and I plan on doing it every day, even during the holidays. My weekend plans are the same as my weekday plans. I do these things everyday and that doesn't change unless I have something special planned.
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