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Sarah
can you proofread my sentence? i find it really awkward.
His calligraphy has been selected in The World Fine Arts Portfolio and he ranked No. 9 among the China modern calligraphers, which was awarded by the magzine —— Collectors in 2003.
٦ مايو ٢٠١٣ ٠٦:٥٧
الإجابات · 4
Sarah,
May I most respectfully suggest that your sentence needs revision.
There are at least three bits of information that we need:
1. Is "Collectors" the name of a magazine?
2, What does "which was awarded by the magazine" refer to? (What was awarded?)
3. It would make for a better sentence if you told us the name of the artist.
If you give us this information, then someone can help you write a clearer sentence.
٦ مايو ٢٠١٣
His calligraphy was selected in The World Fine Arts Portfolio and he hold ninth rank among the Chinese modern calligraphers, which was awarded by the magazine —— Collectors in 2003.
٦ مايو ٢٠١٣
没有语法问题。。。
٦ مايو ٢٠١٣
You are right. Try rearranging it?
٦ مايو ٢٠١٣
لم تجد إجاباتك بعد؟
اكتب اسألتك ودع الناطقين الأصليين باللغات يساعدونك!
Sarah
المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية, الإسبانية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية, الإسبانية
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