Is this sentence perfect? "My oldest sister and I went out to watch "Frozen." I didn't go to the movies with her for about six years. I was a bit afraid that being alone with her would be awkward." I

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Is this sentence perfect? "My oldest sister and I went out to watch "Frozen." I didn't go to the movies with her for about six years. I was a bit afraid that being alone with her would be awkward." I'm not sure if the last sentence is natural. Please let me know.

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I'd delete 'out' from the first sentence. The second sentence needs to be in the past perfect. It should be '..I hadn't been to the movies..'. The third sentence is perfect.

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The last sentence is fine. But I would say "I hadn't been ..." in the first.

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I would say: I haven't been to the movie theatre with her for about six years. I was a little worried that being alone with her would've been awkward.

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