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Rosemary Gutierrez
My article, maybe the worst I've ever written. Well, I just wrote my article about this topic and the logical would be posting it. I had a lot of problems to understand this topic and try to use causative verbs (Let / Make / Have / Get), that's maybe I'll get you confused with my writing, whatever, I'll appreciate your help to improve my English. Thanks a lot!!!IS PROCRASTINATION A SERIOUS PROBLEM? It’s possible many people would consider the PROCASTINATION as a serious problem. From my point of view, PROCASTINATION is not a serious problem, it’s actually a genuine problem, because every one of us had lived it in some moment of our life, but how many of us could stop to think about the level of the consequences. For example, you can forget important tasks, dates, meetings, never get things to do on time, even though you do your best at that moment, and the most important fact is people around you will have a bad concept about you and it might be possible they will never trust in you how the used to. When I was a child, I remember I always had my homework done on time. My mother made me done homework and chores in a due time, everything was right then. By 18 years old, I had become in a PROCASTINATOR GIRL because of an excess of Procrastination, and as a matter of fact my life was looking like a huge disaster, in a hurry all the time with the adrenaline beside me of course, enjoying life according to me and my rules. Until I realized that even you got saved something for the last minute, it couldn’t be work on the same way for the next time. Life is really so uncertain. You should know some things might go wrong when you least expect it, it was time to face the reality, while you grown up, little by little you learn to create your own lifestyle, and they call them personality, it’s obvious if you never get right things doing the same thing: PROCRASTINATING unless you’re very lucky, you have to stop and think about it, that’s why I decided to use PROCRASTINATION on the right way, in the other words we can procrastinate on right things to get something else done, it’s a matter of decisions. For instance, you could decide to procrastinate on watching television and do something productive during that procrastinated time like reading an interesting book, as it will worth it. But, as we know any excess turns into bad, this is why a lot of procrastination in the routine could cause stress and drains you of energy after the adrenaline while procrastinating is gone, believe me, you don’t want to feel that moment. I find fatal getting involved for a lot of it, because there’s loved people beside us, our family, friends, relatives especially, they could be in need of us and vice versa and what will we supposed to say? I’m sorry, I’m in a hurry, I have no time, and I’m getting late once again. Just putting some examples to consider. In summary, everyone may decide how to be known and the wanted lifestyle to include to the personal sign, yeah reputation, but definitely PROCASTINATION can’t be an option, don’t you think so? So then, let’s try to be aware about our actions, every cause has its own effect sooner or later, just never let yourself be carried away by something could relatively looks as simple to handle, you know nothing can be as easy as it looks and remember that any excess isn’t good at all and it won’t worth it waste the time on it and don’t forget to get the people to become aware of this topic.

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When I was a child, I remember I always had my homework done on time. My mother made me do my homework and chores in a due time, everything was right then. By 18 years old, I had become a PROCASTINATOR GIRL because of an excess of Procrastination, and as a matter of fact my life was looking like a huge disaster, in a hurry all the time with the adrenaline beside me of course, enjoying life according to me and my rules. Until the moment I realized that even you got saved something for the last minute, it couldn’t be work on the same way for the next time. (?) Life is really so uncertain.
You should know some things might go wrong when you least expect it, it was time to face the reality, while you grow up, little by little you learn to create your own lifestyle, and they call them personality, it’s obvious if you never get right things doing the same thing: PROCRASTINATING unless you’re very lucky, you have to stop and think about it, that’s why I decided to use PROCRASTINATION on the right way, in the other words we can procrastinate on right things to get something else done, it’s a matter of decisions. For instance, you could decide to procrastinate on watching television and do something productive during that procrastinated time like reading an interesting book, as it will worth it. (I would use some synonymous for procrastination as it can sound a little repetitive)
But, as we know any excess turns into bad, this is why a lot of procrastination in the routine could cause stress and could drain you of energy after the adrenaline is gone, believe me, you don’t want to feel that moment.
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Please, do not rely too much on these corrections, I went over your text kind of quickly, but I hope you find it beneficial. I found your thesis statement to be not very clear and it's something you may want to revise :) Part 1 Procrastination is likely considered to be a serious problem by many people. From my point of view, however, procrastination is not a serious issue (just a synonymous for problem). Indeed I think procrastination is actually a genuine (favorable?) problem (problem is something negative; maybe “practice” is a better choice) because every one of us (had lived) has experienced it at some point in his or her life and.… but how many of us could stop to think about the level of the consequences (I don't know what do you mean here). For example, you can forget important tasks, dates, meetings, never do things on time, even though you are tryng your best and the most important fact is that people around you will have a bad image of you and it might be possible that they will never trust you how the used to. (But weren’t you trying to prove that procrastination is positive?)
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part 3 I find fatal (fatal? you mean dangerous, detrimental?) getting involved for a lot of it, because there’s loved people beside us, our family, friends, relatives especially, they could be in need of us and vice versa and what will we supposed to say? I’m sorry, I’m in a hurry, I have no time, and I’m getting late once again. Just putting some examples to consider. 

In summary, everyone may decide how to be known and the wanted lifestyle to include to the personal sign, yeah reputation (I would not use yeah in a formal paper), but definitely PROCASTINATION can’t be an option, don’t you think so? So then, let’s try to be aware about our actions, every cause has its own effect sooner or later, just never let yourself be carried away by something could relatively looks as simple to handle, you know nothing can be as easy as it looks and remember that any excess isn’t good at all and it won’t worth it waste the time on it and don’t forget to get the people to become aware of this topic.

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