Native English speakers PLEASE help.
what do you think about the structure?
- Pondering the issue meticulously one will come to realize that money is more important than love!
The structure is fine, I just think there should be a comma between the two clauses.
Pondering the issue meticulously, one will come to realize that money is more important than love!
Very high level language. Nice work!
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This is fine. It is a more complex and academic sentence structure, but perfectly understandable.
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Pondering the issue meticulously, he realized that money is more important than love!
To ponder an issue meticulously, one will come to realize that.....,