I can only see あいうえお、かきくけ、さしすせそ、なにぬねの、はひふへほ on the pages that you posted. Are there still more pictures of your notebook somewhere else? Anyway, as far as I can tell, everything looks better than my handwriting. I would say that if I could correct one thing, you misspellt 『ほ』ほ. ← Can you get closer to this 『ほ』on your screen, and get closer to the two horizontal lines? The vertical line which crosses these two horizontal lines do not penetrate the upper line, right? But yours penetrates the upper one, so it looks like 『Iま』 Can you see the difference? 『ほ』←correct 『Iま』←wrong Oh, and one more thing; seems like you missed hiragana "こ(ko)" I see か,き,く,け, but not こ. The other user also mentioned some other hiragana and katakana that you wrote, but I really can't see them. So if you can tell me where they are, and if you would like, I can take a look at them.

I couple of things that caught my attention: Especially with your な, ぬ, は, ほ, and ね, the end of your stroke drifts off to the right. This is because our alphabet is written from left to right so our letters naturally tend to lean towards that direction. The Japanese writing system, however, is traditionally written from top to bottom, and the characters should reflect that. The ends of your strokes should taper off towards the bottom. Just google "handwritten hiragana" to see some examples. Your つ is very hard to read, especially once you move on to katakana, you could easily confuse it with ワ, フ, or ク. Try not to make the top of your つ look too flat or concave. This is a character you'll have to write a lot (most often in the form of the small っ) so you really don't want to botch that one. Other than that, I think you only need some more practice to familiarize yourself with the strokes to eventually get a consistent look. Happy learning! :)

Yeah, I meant the strokes themselves. This is what I meant: http://imgur.com/Lod8u2P