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Please correct "they don't deserve actually."
Please, correct and can I use the word actually, here for a formal essay?.
There are several reasons to believe that artists are paid unnecessarily high wage that they don't deserve actually.
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Using your sentence as a basis, I would wordsmith it as:
There are several reasons to believe that artists are paid unnecessarily high *wages* that they don't *actually* deserve.
- Wages isn't the word we tend to use in this case. A wage would imply something recurring (like a weekly payment), but usually, artists are paid for a project, so the more appropriate word here is "salary" or "artists receive/are given unnecessarily high/large compensation".
-You could also use the word "merit" to indicate something "deserved with effort."
Ex: There are several reasons to believe that artists are paid disproportionately high salaries that are not merited.
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How about this?
Actually, there are several reasons to believe that artists are paid undeserved, out-of-proportion wages.
I hope it helps!
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