Hello, Suhaib! You made an excellent attempt, but there were some minor mistakes. Please see the corrections below. In the future, it is best to put your writing in Italki's 'Notebook' section. That's the best way to get a response! I hope this correction helps. If you are interested in taking English lessons, I am a professional English teacher on Italki. I would be happy to help you increase your English fluency. Correction: In 1988, Borak attended a Turkish musical institution to study music, but he dropped out after 4 years of study. After, he started playing for the famous band The Magnetic which was formed by the famous musician Orgay. Since then, Borak has become the ambassador for Turkish music and has traveled all over the world. He stayed with a few famous Turkish musicians and they recorded songs together. Later, he formed his own band, Loco Tayfa.