Hello! Your writing is very good~ We didn't get good results from the dissection that we were supposed to get and I thought why we've done that. Correction: We didn't get the expected results from our disection, and I thought about why this had happened. (What you had written is correct, but you could shorten it a bit!) I think animal dissections should be banned in schools? Correction: use a period instead of a question mark becuase you are making a statement~ If we want to become vets or something, dissecting animals certainly would require in a university. Correction: would require training in university Good job~~ I hope this helped if you have any questions feel free to ask ^_^