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What's wrong with this sentence? " You plummeted him into the well who dug for me. "
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Plummet means to fall, it's not something you can do TO someone else. For instance, you can't say. I fall you down the stairs, I fall you down the well. You should use a verb such as 'push' 'threw/throw', and so on.
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You might like "hurled" instead of "plummeted". Robert's right, "plummet" is not something you can do to someone else. "You hurled him into the well which he dug for me."
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I think it should be like this: You plummeted him into the well which is dug for me.
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Word order errors
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